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I have a dream
Obama's election itself has changed the world，This is because the world's most powerful country,but slao the country which have had the most painful racial discrimination, meet a black president.the ideal of Martin Luther Dr. Jin 40 years ago "I have a dream" has been realized. If there are still people do not think the dream has came true,then. That is because the shadow of his own heart is so heavy which Stood in his eyes.
His election let us think of whether Our hearts has such a dream And has been the pursuit of that dream
Obama was elected President of the United States ,here we see the significance
This is much greater significance than how the so-called U.S. economy for the next four years and Iraq peoblem
Maybe you dreamed of the disappearance of the gap between urban and rural areas Perhaps he dreamed of every Chinese people have a gentleman-like quality;or Both sides of the strait dream of the Chinese mainland and Ta

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